Tuesday, May 13, 2008
a comment on Stephanie's blog
another student blog comment
Responding to 'What is Second Life?'
I found this post massively interesting, engaging and thorough; I enjoyed your concept of secondlife as a second chance. Even though I have not played the game before, I’m still familiar with elements relating to secondlife that you discussed so concisely: hiding behind a virtual character, finding success in the online world when it’s lacking in the offline world, etc. I’m glad you clarified that secondlife is also seen as a social tool and a niche online community, in a sense, and THEN made your statement regarding secondlife as a second chance.
Even as a non-player, this post was fascinating.
I would have liked to see more exploration, and more of your view, regarding your conception of the virtual world as a second chance. Do you think that it’s healthy for users to “hide away?” In a sense, I can understand WHY a player would choose to do so, especially ones that “have no interest in how the real world runs,” as you said, but it’s difficult for me to accept that this is healthy behaviour.
You state that secondlife “builds confidence on users who lack self confidence.” Does this confidence have real worth though, if it's all generated in a virtual world? “Secondlife hides the negative appearances or internal behaviour.” Again, I can understand why a person struggling socially or personally would want to “configure a new behaviour and appearance” online, but in the long term, I feel this is damaging rather than healing - masking a problem through a secondlife persona, and effectively ignoring it. Feel free to disagree with me!
a comment I left on a student's blog
Monday, May 12, 2008
you might as well get penguins to write a novel!

If technology can have a collaboration-oriented meaning, why can't art, music, thoughts and so forth? If we want to start thinking outside the box of Web 1.0, we should shift towards collaborative attitudes rather than original ones. We can have collaborative arts as well, a shared inspiration. What if people are to make a drawing, rather than a person? Can people contribute melodies to a music track to make a masterpiece?
a collaborative, wiki-based creative writing exercise... An experiment in creative writing and community. Anyone can join in. Anyone can write. Anyone can edit. Let's see if the crowds are not only wise, but artistic. Can a collective create a believable fictional voice? Or will too many cooks spoil the broth?
It has been an amazing experience. I feel sorry to be losing this odd community and hope that there will be clusters who stay together and write together (user Joanna Howard).
... opening this experiment up to the world caused problems (but) the importance of this experiment was in the freedom of expression. On the whole I found respect and collaboration. On the way maybe Penguins community found its good identity through 'natural election' (user Neri).
For the past three weeks, I've been ankle-deep in wiki. I've witnessed writers enter full of hope and storm away again in despair, and an equal number stay to wallow with exhilaration in the steam intensity of group creativity.
The wonderful richness of different cultures contributing to this has been a moving study and intimacy of experience and vision.

citizen journalism
The concept of citizen journalism is simultaneously fascinating and terrifying. I feel a certain trepidation as I try to understand where its come from, and where its going to go. Before our Week 9 lecture, I wasn’t aware that I was aware of citizen journalism. Now that the term and movement has been named, explained to me, and explored so concisely, I can understand that I’ve been exposed to countless examples of citizen journalism, mainly through the form of blogs and pamphlets. As an audience member and writer, I’m amazed at the depth and brevity of the citizen journalism movement, its seemingly spontaneous rising, the amount of passionate debate generated by it, its possibilities.
A definition of the term I agree with, appreciate for its simplicity, and which I will use for the purpose of this blog comes from this YouTube video. Lisa Williams describes citizen journalism, quite simply, as journalism that is done by non journalists, or people committing random acts of journalism. Basically, the citizen journalist movement embraces the idea that the readers are now participating in the authoring of the content (Williams). This ties in with Axel’s produser theory, which is that on the Web 2.0 platform, the consumer now equals the producer. An online example of this theory in practice is OhmyNews.com, a Koran collaborative online newspaper, with has more than 26, 000 registered citizen journalists all producing news from the bottom up, in a direct challenge to established media outlets (Kahney, Wired. 2003).
I think it’s this sense of challenge that mounts my feeling of wariness, my slight discomfort. A small part of me, the panicked, nervous part, sees the rise of citizen journalism as a threat to established journalism, while another (I hope, bigger) part of me simultaneously appreciates the idea of the individual voice, through citizen journalism, getting more leverage (Dan Gilmor). I’m aware that my latent feelings of trepidation are close minded and elitist, fueled in part by arrogance. As a creative writing student wanting to move into journalism, I am protective of my future craft. I know that I am not a professional writer, so I am not directly offended. I have years and years to go before I can say that I’m a professional, even ‘good’ writer, but I’m proud to be studying in this field. The assumption by some that a blogger whacking away at their computer is on the same level, journalistically, as a professional writer who has studied their field and has years of experience, is slighting.
Andrew Keen, author of ‘The Cult of the Amateur,’ argues that journalists “follow a set of standards, a code of ethics. Objectivity rules. That’s not the case with citizen journalists. Anything goes in that world (Vargas, 2007).” As much as the concept of citizen journalism makes me a little uneasy, I can see the narrow-mindedness and naivety of Keen’s argument. I have a firm belief in the power and shared intelligence of the community, and I think it’s safe to assume that as with anything in the digital literacy, the community will organize quality in a way that means only reputable, professional citizen journalists will be garnered attention.
I feel a bit torn. I’m making a conscious effort not to come to the panicked conclusion that citizen journalism means the end of traditional journalism; in doing so, I know that I will be ignoring the exciting possibilities generated by the citizen journalism movement. It would be ridiculous of me to assume that one cannot exist without the other, I feel that a far better way of approaching the existence of both citizen journalism, and ‘big media’ journalism, is in a way that is symbiotic and mutually beneficial. It’s important to accept that one of the main concepts behind citizen journalism that mainstream media reporters are not the exclusive center of knowledge on a subject - the audience knows more collectively than the reporter alone (Glaser, 2006). ‘Storming the News Gatekeepers,’ argues that journalism is enriched through the perspectives of everyday Joes and Janes, who offer more voices, more texture to public debate (Vargas, 2007).
I’ll try not to panic. I’ll try to be open-minded, to welcome the possibilities of bottom up journalism and “competition from the very public we serve (journalist Kenneth Neil).” In the words of Dave Gillmor, who has expressed my thoughts more eloquently than I could hope to:
"I hope we don’t lose big journalism, but want to see it as part of an ecosystem where all kinds of things from sole bloggers in deep narrow niches to what we have today…where it’s symbiotic as opposed to entirely competitive."
References (accessed May 10):
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=58iZpMRclwI
http://www.wired.com/culture/lifestyle/news/2003/05/58856
http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2007/11/26/AR2007112602025.html?
http://www.pbs.org/mediashift/2006/09/digging_deeperyour_guide_to_ci.html
Saturday, May 10, 2008
online communities
'Many volunteers in online communities do it for the love of the conversation and connections, and are willing to give up their time to make those communities more interesting and pleasant places to inhabit. I believe in the power of the Internet as an experience beyond just sucking up information - it's always been the interactivity that gets me going, and whether I'm paid or not, that's the part that keeps me interested.'
'Since then, I think the strong sense of community - the sense of belonging and getting something out of the participation is what drives people to contribute.'(Glaser, 2006).
Friday, May 2, 2008
Web 1.0 vs Web 2.0
'Web 2.0 is a knowledge oriented environment where human interactions generate content that are published, managed and used through network applications in a service oriented architecture.'

Web 1.0 was about them, Web 2.0 is about us.